This story so far is about a guy named Pryor he and his friend had gone on a trip near Jacksonville beach. They had both left after work at about midnight when they were driving they noticed a guy behind them that was drunk out of his mind a swirving everywhere. They both kept thinking to theirselves that that guy better stop before he kills someone. A few minutes later the guy had came to a stop. Pryor stopped his car right after he saw the drunk stop to see if everything was okay. When he got to the man and began to talk to him he looked as if he was in shock shaking back and forth. The only things that Pryor could understand that the man was saying was that his wife had been shot down on the beach and that he thought she was dead. He tried to get him to calm down but things just kept getting worse. Pretty soon Pryor noticed a gun shot in both the mans sholder and in his right hand. He didnt think they looked to serious but decided to call 911 to make sure the man was okay and to investicate the beach where the man was saying his wife was dead at.
What i think is going to happen next is that the cops are going to come and check out the man. i also think they're going to find his wifr on the beach dead and try to investigate the murder and find out who the killer was.
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Friday, September 11, 2009
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Natalie, this is a nice job so far. Remember to put the genre of what you are reading in the title of the first blog you write on it.
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